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Just Water

May 26, 2009, 6:11:33 PM by ~Shanecus
Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Free Verse

Some lands on this Earth never know peace
And in a world fueled by war
A young poor boy stands outside his door

A house with no windows
His door has no frame
And like the house broken
The boy is the same

As he steps out he finds a bullet gone astray
Into his chest it plunges
Then the end of his days

But as he lays down completely alone
A simple request comes to his lips
No it isn't about his windowless home
Neither his only sis

With words barely learned
And even a little lisp
He musters all of his strength and asks for water
But he never finds his final wish

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Comatose Wake me up
I’ve been in this coma,
So long I’m stuck
And all I now need is you

This place is no paradise
No tropical treat
Just a man with closed eyes
On white sheets

I’m not fishing
Or bathing in waterfalls
I’m barely breathing
Outside of white pristine halls

I’m not playing cards
And tossing the die
No, I’m rock hard
And here I lie

So just take me to the Lord
High into the skies
And please pull the cord
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Mine Should I compare you to a rose
Like the bards of past
Or perhaps to a flawless diamond
To say that our love would last

Yet maybe the first snow of winter
To say that you are pure
Oh so many ways to express how I feel
And then none are sure

For if only there was a word for you
To express how you are kind
Yet I could search our language threw
And still none could come to mind

Or a way to tell you
That your eyes are gorgeous
Or a song to compare
To your voice so harmonious

Yet try as I may
And try as I might
For you my love
No symbol is right

And oh here I sit
With paper and pen
For my dear Sarah
I Mine by ~Shanecus

Polar Syphony Ch. 2 part. 1 That’s Life
It was a warm day for December, and she was looking beautiful. Jessie always did look beautiful in the sun; she practically glowed on days like this. Everything was going great and all was right in the world for those few sort moments. Then there was a screeching noise and everything seemed to just stop.
He remembered that life was still going on ok at first, until people started to get greedy and scared. Then he and Jessie just had to run, and run, and continue running. Sometimes they wouldn’t eat all day, other times they would gorge themselves on food that they found and regret it later. Food was changing.
He rPolar Syphony Ch. 2 part. 1 by ~Shanecus

Long Time Back Home Nothing could have been clearer that day
The look in your eyes gave you away
As I sat on the outbound train
Traveling East into the Great Plains
You sat outside in the cold
You told me you would wait until you were old
And as I packed my army sack
You made me promise I would come back

But as I returned ten years have gone down the line
I prayed your love was still locked in time
As my heart hoped and swayed
From knowing I would see you that day
I at first began to feel doubt
But the conductor soon made the trains whistle shout
And as I met you by the bench by the train
On that bench beside you a young boy was lainLong Time Back Home by ~Shanecus

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The interesting thing known as Life

Jun 24, 2009, 11:43:52 PM by ~Shanecus
Journals / Personal

The past few weeks have been... Well interesting.
Now here I am sitting at my friends house at two thirty nine in the morning on deviant art writting about it.
So a few things, I love my girl.
I pretty much am gonna have a place to live now.
I'm listening to some new music at the moment.
I finally feel happy again.
And the one above this is the most important.

I have a lot of bad things going on in my life too at the moment. There is no doubt about that at all. But when you have a goal and work towards it so hard and you see progress you tend to forget the bad and see the world anew. And to tell ya the truth a lot about the change has been just from me finally talking about the stuff going on.

About the art, or poems or whatever you want to call what I do. I plan on uploading more. That's why the site is here after all. And I want to see more from you guys too. Tell me what's up.

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